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Southern sulter

Too-technical japan wrote:What're you celebrating about?Yours is great, really pleasing to the eyes. CARL?!

yes, Carl with a C, anyone who calls it karlism is an dum dum

Too-technical japan and Spiceeeeeee

Southern sulter

Have you ever looked at mouse traps and tought, hmm how could I get the police called on me with this, introducing the revolver mouse trap
https://www.thefirearmblog.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2018/03/YouTuber-Recreates-the-Mouse-Trap-Gun-1.png

Too-technical japan and Spiceeeeeee

My flag is based on the Spanish flag xD

BloomFairy, Zoygaria, Too-technical japan, Spiceeeeeee, and 1 otherLuna machima

Too-technical japan

Too-technical japan wrote:Is it book character design time?

https://imgur.com/a/lxRX0ZU

Yes, yes it is.

(I had forgotten that I had meant to tell you all this stuff and then Kolron posted something like this so I'm really sorry that I kind of copied you, but the characters themselves look nothing alike.)
You can easily pick out which one I am. The girl with too much yellow in her design. This book is going to be full of Easter eggs, random references to Kantrias, and old names I am reusing.

The girl on the far left is Alex. She is my friend’s OC, and has the power to put people to sleep by touching them. This is only transmitted through touching the skin, so gloves prevent her from randomly making those she hugs fall asleep.

The one next to her in the middle left is me. Ichika. She has telekinesis, and it can be shown through blue energy I randomly threw in there. Very different from Rose, eh?
Speaking of Rose... I reused her power for a girl named Aria. She has wings (obviously) and is on the opposite side (there are two sides, ASTO (American Society of Talented Others) and NNB (New Natormy Base)) or ASTO. (Our heroines are on NNB.)

Back on track, Naomi (or EC) has the power of charm. She can basically manipulate anyone to do their bidding. Her younger brother, Charles (who is not featured in this photo but the next one and is Antarctical Nordic Lands), has the power of luck. Pretty self explanatory.

Cathal (the one in the wheelchair) is the paralyzed mashup of Erik, Uclosa's design, and Cathal (or Sulter and Ulm's characters) from the first book I showed to you all, Don’t Feed the Freaks. Cathal has the power to fight really well and his left arm turns all scaly when doing so. His power activation can be shown by his eyes glowing orange. Of course, I didn’t really know what he would look like so I messed around with his appearance. He looks way different than he does in this photo. He also has prosthetic legs now! Yayyy

Terra (Who is not in any of these photos) is the mashup of Sulter’s design and Timmy from DFF (don’t feed the freaks). Terra looks exactly like Cathal, but shorter, and has a grayish-blue trench coat. His powers are manipulating plants. Also shown by orange eyes.

Where is Page, or Seraph/Tuskena’s character from DFF?
Good question! He is on the ASTO side, similar to Rose’s reincarnation. He goes by John or something now, but I dunno he might have rock arms or have the power of sight but I just remembered him a few weeks ago so he’s not a very well developed character yet.

Hooolllldd up you mentioned Mihai and Kolron a few weeks ago! What’s up with that?!
Ah yes. I loved including them into this book. Truly a wonderful time I had confusing my friend with Zoygarian. If you’re wondering what I did,
Mihai and Kolron Avarí Kaschak are father and son. (Adopted I think, but I made them have the same eyes so maybe Mihai is Kolron’s uncle? I don’t know) (In this world everyone has powers but it’s super unique so some people’s powers only work when their counterpart is around.) Mihai has the power to stop time temporarily in a small area, or at least make everything sluggish. Kolron’s works best when Mihai’s is in affect. When they blink during that stopped time period, they stop the energy that fuels the present people’s powers and basically erase their powers until Kolron blinks again. If Kolron doesn’t use their power while Mihai stops time, then they can pick one person and drain their energy, causing them to fall unconscious. Also Mihai is still Zoygarian, they use Zoygarian regularly to accompany their English. But Kolron is ✨Italian✨.

Who is the pink girl?
She is the character of my friend, she lives in an AU where I kill the current squad and leave Charles all alone. Oh yes! And Ichika is currently being blackmailed by a reincarnated Erik! He can read minds and is really annoying and kills the current squad. I know. Not a very good reincarnation.

What are the colorful masks on the characters?
Those are the way that we can distinguish NNB from ASTO. ASTO has codenames you refer to your fellow recruits as, and NNB uses your real name and hides your face. Did I mention that ASTO is American and NNB is the rest of the world? It was a coincidence I’m sorry

Why did you tell us all this?
In summer of 2021 I will hopefully be finished with this storyline and publish it to Wattpad! I'm already sort of some with the first book I just need to transfer it. It's gonna be super unprofessional and lazy because it was done over roleplay, so it will look bad and its pretty cliche but I had fun while making this stuff so its fiiiiine.

I think I covered everything. Whew! That as a lot to type. Hopefull ythat all makes sense

So I said this

I'm actually not going to publish it...

BUT

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Enjoy :)

Spiceeeeeee and Luna machima

Too-technical japan

How is everyone?

Uclosa, The Seraph Foundation, Spiceeeeeee, and Luna machima

Too-technical japan wrote:How is everyone?

I’m good
How do you?

Too-technical japan and Uclosa

Too-technical japan

Spiceeeeeee wrote:I’m good
How do you?

I’m good as well! Thank you.

Uclosa and Spiceeeeeee

Too-technical japan wrote:How is everyone?

having fun

Too-technical japan and Spiceeeeeee

Too-technical japan

Uclosa wrote:having fun

Glad/Good to hear!

Uclosa and Spiceeeeeee

Too-technical japan wrote:Her mother and father would understand why she cursed at that moment. James’ influence was probably rubbing off on her anyways. Only the bottoms of her sneakers had sunk so far, but soon her (still) untied laces were devoured. Aahhh. So that’s why the Fear Trap wanted us here, to finally stop ‘playing’ with us two and feast off our fear.

Oh gosh. Is this really the end?

Wait. DuckTales reboot episode number I can’t remember, Webby had a grappling hook and latched onto something on the ceiling after they had sunk and pulled those she was traveling with out. What do we have that is similar?

"Fear? Oh no child, I've found something better. I've tasted something far sweeter than childish fears and useless angst." There was a creepy laugh. "Despair. The loss of all hope, knowing it's the end, being permanently stuck. Quicksand usually captures that well." Mara dropped quickly, the sand now up to her stomach.

Too-technical japan

Too-technical japan

The Seraph Foundation wrote:"Fear? Oh no child, I've found something better. I've tasted something far sweeter than childish fears and useless angst." There was a creepy laugh. "Despair. The loss of all hope, knowing it's the end, being permanently stuck. Quicksand usually captures that well." Mara dropped quickly, the sand now up to her stomach.

(Well gosh frigging oh dear?)

Oh.

The sand was now at her ankles. She seemed to be sinking more slowly than Mara, who was strangely quiet. Wait, she was sleeping. Right.

Hm. There's got to be a flaw in the system. Like when the fear trap devours us. It's all about the end product. So maybe we have to be as far from their desired 'taste' as possible. Maybe get angry, or make the Fear Trap angry?
Ichika unfastened and started chucking random things from her backpack at the ceiling, where the voice boomed from. It was all ruined by the water anyways. She began to recall all the angry thoughts of the past. The time where the mean lady wouldn't let her friends see what was happening on the stage. When the PE teacher did not let her write her name on the board with all the others when her TEAM got the highest number of points.

"SHUT-"
A spare water bottle was lost. It hit something with a dull thud, and something that felt like a shudder echoed throughout the room. Perfect. This would definitely tick the Fear Trap off.

"THE-"
Socks. She doesn't remember putting those there.

"@$#%"
A bathroom pass from her previous school. Might as well put the stolen blank detention slip with it.

"UP!!"
A final fling of Altoids. She had made sure to snag some, the really spicy kind, and jam them into Mara's mouth. All hands on deck, at least the ones available, were needed.

Uclosa and Spiceeeeeee

Imagine if our nation humans were ghost hunters

Southern sulter wrote:................................

Your phone seems to have gotten stuck on the dots.

Uclosa wrote:I am greatly disappointed TIR

Why would you be? Who doesn’t love a good wiggle ;D.

Too-technical japan, I was celebrating that I woke up happy.

Too-technical japan, Uclosa, and Spiceeeeeee

Too-technical japan

Uclosa wrote:Imagine if our nation humans were ghost hunters

That would be awesome!!

Uclosa

Too-technical japan

Terra Inferiori Reliquere wrote:Your phone seems to have gotten stuck on the dots.

Why would you be? Who doesn’t love a good wiggle ;D.

Too-technical japan, I was celebrating that I woke up happy.

Ooohh, yay for waking up happy!

Too-technical japan wrote:Ooohh, yay for waking up happy!

Am doing much much worse right now tho, soon-to-be-niece.

Too-technical japan

Too-technical japan wrote:That would be awesome!!

a team of 6 going ghost hunting in a huge mansion , would be fun , and scary

Too-technical japan

Too-technical japan

Terra Inferiori Reliquere wrote:Am doing much much worse right now tho, soon-to-be-niece.

Sorry to hear, soon-to-be-uncle.

Too-technical japan

Uclosa wrote:a team of 6 going ghost hunting in a huge mansion , would be fun , and scary

This could be the perfect roleplay plot! And the mansion HAS to be falling apart, maybe a random raccoon here and there XD

Uclosa

I need spice
Someone gib me spice
Or I will burn a random Capital city

Too-technical japan

Too-technical japan

Spiceeeeeee wrote:I need spice
Someone gib me spice
Or I will burn a random Capital city

I have ramen seasoning

That's all I could think of

Spiceeeeeee

Too-technical japan wrote:I have ramen seasoning

That's all I could think of

It’s.............
Acceptable

Too-technical japan

Too-technical japan

Spiceeeeeee wrote:It’s.............
Acceptable

Ok! Good. How much will you need?

Spiceeeeeee

Too-technical japan wrote:This could be the perfect roleplay plot! And the mansion HAS to be falling apart, maybe a random raccoon here and there XD

i mean we could do it at less people , would require less waiting for the story to progress lmao

Too-technical japan and Spiceeeeeee

Too-technical japan wrote:Ok! Good. How much will you need?

1,000 pounds

Too-technical japan

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