IWK welcome telegram draft

Welcome to [region]Isle of Wooloo Kingdom[/region]!

Thanks for joining this region, to start off, here are the [url=https://www.nationstates.net/nation=north_american_imperial_state/detail=factbook/id=1475613]RMB rules[/url]. RP is a big part of this region, whether or not it is character or nation RP, the RP rules and stats are [url=https://www.nationstates.net/nation=the_wooloo_pact/detail=factbook/id=1475616]here[/url]. To claim land there is a [url=https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=1477088]form[/url], and the maps we have are [url=https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=1485888]here[/url]. There is a discord you can [url=https://discord.com/invite/S5AXvqxTMx]join[/url], and we also have many [url=https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=1425978]things[/url] out back. Also if you can, please endorse our delegate as it helps ensure the security of our region.

Finally, don't forget to respect all officers and other nations, and have fun!
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